Seems to have rocky influence. I like it.
I was searching for Donkey Boner music and landed here... exactly what I needed!
You had a great build in the beginning but as the song progresses it just gets too busy and goes downhill from there. You have a very solid foundation. Clean it up and give the song more focus. This will be a sick song.
I like the build to 0:30 but once it drops it gets pretty bad -- and then after the "bad" part ends around 1:00 it gets back into a nice chill version of the first 30 second build. Would love to see this with a better beat/rhythm around 30-1
Sasha, nicely done. This is a good song and i enjoyed listening to it.
Several comments though. First, i wouldn't have put both the vocals of the guy and the girl into this song. The vocals for both of them are two different styles. When i heard the guy in the intro i was expecting a deeper and more robust song, but then when it switched over to the girl it was smoother, had more finesse. I don't know if thats what you were going for, but to me it didn't seem right because i felt that i was listening to two different songs.
Also, i recommend toning down the volume on all the music during vocal parts. The girls vocals are great but i can barely hear here. You want her vocals to be the dominate sound in your song, so tone down the volume on the music during vocals and fade it back in when she isn't singing. I think that would have made the song a lot clearer and it would have delievered with more strength.
Also, just an idea. I think it would have been awesome if at one part you just completly faded the music out and had only vocals of the girl. Then cut her off for like 5 seconds of complete silence and BAM bust the music back in...just an idea though..
Overall, i enjoyed the song and i'm enjoying your CD sasha. Good work, but get some sleep and don't spend too much time on the computer.
Thanks ivan, i'll work on it. Ya the vox aren't placed right. I'll try and do that 5 sec silence thing too.
Good song Sasha
This is one of your best songs that i've heard. The intro area sounds great and the music flows well with the bass. A very simple beat put together nicely.
However, as the last reviewer stated about the cut-off. it really kills the song, i dunno what you were thinking there. yet, you do recover nicely from the cut-offs (which are unnecessary in my opinion.)
This song IS good but it seems rushed...it needs a little more tweaking before you post it up here. You rush your songs way to fast and it seems like you just want to post them up here...you need to spend an extra day or so on them to perfect them.
Good but needs work
Umm the song was really a good song and it WOULD sound great if you'd check your audio levels before exporting it and uploading it to NG. My speakers nearly exploded because your levels are way to high. Fix it, and then upload the song..it'll be 20x better
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